ROUGH CUT EVALUATION

Our rough cut has very good filming techniques and a filming style appropriate for our chosen genre (thriller) We need to make adjustments to the narrative of our title sequence and film opening as it lacks coherence and confuses the audience. We need to make our story clearer and make several adjustments to our storyboard. Overall, I believe it is a title sequence that has lots of potential and just needs to be tweaked in terms of narrative and what we show in the opening.