Improvements based on feedback- (SAFI) Elabouration on Pitch Feedback

Based on the feedback given to us by our media teachers we have made the following changes to the production:

-Instead of pairing our main character with a mental illness, we classed her as being "deluded." To properly act out this role (me, as the main character) I researched into this meaning, relayed it onto the group and reached to a group interpretation.

-Our main character will act like there is nothing wrong with her actions, all happy-go-lucky, completely oblivious to people around her.

-The ending is also left with more loose ends than our initial recordings, additionally the story aswell, we have almost re-recorded all of our footage. We left our audience with more questions, to figure things out for themselves and grip them more.

-We also fixed the lighting problem by re-positioning the camera.

-We also used more angles to add more depth to the footage.