The feedback we have gotten has showed us that multiple points of our plot are flawed.
-The character seems too "shallow" for the plot, since she has a mental illness she has to be more in-depth, however in my opinion, our time is very limited, so we might just adjust the plot to our favour just be highlighting that she is obsessed with this guy.
-Our resources weren't good enough. The diary, didn't ultimately look like a diary at all. Which is agreeable, but yet again, judging on time, we might not be able to make much changes.
-We have been told we can use these for our rough cut. Which ultimately, will be less stressful for us.
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